I've been using dialogue to end short stories that are first person, but it seems as though the last word of dialogue is uttered not by the first person narrator but a character who is the primary focus of the narrative. Dialogue may be an easy way for you to exit a story, especially if what is said stays with the reader by giving piercing insight into the soul of that character.
Posted by Kirby at November 16, 2003 03:08 PM